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    The beach. Definitely not your favorite place. They could be crowded, loud, and the ocean sometimes too cold to even dip a toe in, and yet here you were. Well, you weren't exactly on the beach yet. In fact, you were actually in the parking lot... in a car, your boyfriend's car to be exact. A towel was wrapped around your form, hiding from both of you how you looked in your bathing suit.

    Your boyfriend sat in the driver's seat, looking at you seriously. "(Y/n)..." he said gently.

    "Ludwig I've changed my mind... I don't really want to go swimming..." you said quietly, wrapping the towel tighter around yourself, not letting your eyes meet his.

    A slight frown made itself evident on your German boyfriend's face as he clicked his seatbelt off so he could more easily maneuver himself to look at you, cupping your cheek. It took you a moment before you shyly drifted your gaze up to that of Ludwig's usually piercing blue one. Usually his eyes showed his alertness, his stubbornness, his strength, but when he looked at you, you could feel your heart melt at the tenderness at which he did so.

    You had something of a weight problem. Of course it wasn't as bad as you almost constantly thought it was, after all almost every girl can find a flaw when they look at themselves in the mirror, no matter how beautiful they really are. You were just a little more chubby than you would have liked to be, and it almost constantly embarrassed you unless you were just around Ludwig. He made you feel like a princess, no matter what.

    "(Y/n)," your name was again whispered by him, making you blink your big (e/c) eyes up at Ludwig, making a rare smile tilt up his lips. "You are beautiful..." he muttered before shyly pecking your lips.

    He was never one for physical affection, that much was true, but he would do anything if it meant you would feel better about yourself. To him, you were one of the most beautiful girls in the world, not that he would admit it freely. He wasn't really... confident when talking about feelings or emotions in general, but if it meant making you feel better he would do anything.

    A shy smile spread across your face. "Thanks, Luddy..." you whispered, grateful for the compliment. It would be one thing if it was just your mom or your grandparents complimenting you, they were meant to say things like that, but for Ludwig to say things like this to you, it was practically an honor. You had known him for three years, dating him for only two of them, and throughout that time you had gotten to know him quite well. You knew quite well that he wasn't one to simply spew out any compliment that came to mind. No, he would much rather show you how he felt rather than say it.

    For instance, he didn't have to tell you those magical three words because the simple way he opened his door, got out of the car, and walked to your side to open your door for you as a gentleman would spoke louder than you felt he ever could.

    Letting a light blush cover your cheeks, you took his hand, getting out of the car, still holding your towel around you. Ludwig's words reassuring you to get out of the car, but not to quite yet let go of your towel.

    Your flipflops slapped the pavement as you made your way towards the beach, it was then that the sand began to find its way in between your toes.

    As you slowly approached a spot on the beach where a large blanket was spread out with a picnic basket in the middle holding it down, keeping it safe from the wind’s grasp. Nearby was the rest of the Axis, Feliciano and Kiku, both working on their own separate sandcastle. Feliciano was happily chatting away, patting the damp sand down as Kiku just nodded, preferring (as usual) to remain quiet.

    You looked up at Ludwig, taking in his appearance, from his tousled blonde hair, not slicked back as it usually was, to his pale blue eyes, and then down further, to his bare and quite muscular chest.

    "You are beautiful..."

    And slowly, you let your towel fall.
Wow. Okay. XD So much Germany in my gallery. Sorry about that! I'm gonna have some more diversity in there by the next week or so...

Anyways! This would be :iconbonkers-4-hatter:'s request! Hope you like it~! :D
Hetalia isn't mine... unfortunately.
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:icongermanyfan123321:
Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
I love this!!
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IGame101 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the ending

oh my god i love you
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:iconhaibai21:
HAIBAI21 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Omg ;-; I luff this
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Why thank you~!
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Hazle1 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Dude, I don't care about my weight. my only problem is that i can only wear a one piece without my chest pouring out ^^'
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
XD Well... I guess that is a different kind of problem.
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Hazle1 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Yeah... XD
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E-Sane Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Same with me. But, thanks to Germany, I've lost a couple of pounds and now can eat an occasional bar of chocolate again.
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
Aw~ That's great! :)
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E-Sane Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sooo happy!! I can eat my hidden stash again and not feel so guilty afterwords. I'm still shy, though. That's why we've never gone swimming together.
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FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Professional General Artist
omg the last few lines classical music came on and it sounded like reader-chan suddenly was very confident. :iconhappycryplz:
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Hey, that's awesome! I love when things can work out in that sort of way. XD
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Lullabydream Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is soo wonderfulT^T
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
Thank you very much! :)
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Lullabydream Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome :D
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!:iconcryforeverplz:
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problemo!
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Faustita Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Lol probably when i let that towel fall i pick it back up with quick speed and go to the girls bathroom quick change and done XP
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Aw... You shouldn't feel that way about yourself!
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:iconfaustita:
Faustita Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
:) thanksss  for the encouragement 
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:iconvivaamerica:
VivaAmerica Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
It's like this was meant for me! I hate looking at myself in the mirror....
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Aw... Well I'm sure that Germany thinks you are beautiful, as well as many others!
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VivaAmerica Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Awww, you're sweet! Thank you. :tighthug:
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
I'm sure it's only the truth~
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VivaAmerica Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
:iconblushplz: :iconohstopityouplz: :iconletmehugyouplz:
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kittycall12 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
I'm pretty insecure about my shape..Low self esteem :I-StupidBullies;=;- I want someone that cares >3< I just wear swimming shorts and just a normal bikini top.. I love this so much c:
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Aww... I am sure you are beautiful~ And Luddy thinks so too~
Thanks~! Glad you liked it!
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DRIFTINGNOTES-SAMA NEVER FAILS TO IMPRESS uwu

I'm very insecure, and I wish that I could find a Germany to tell me this... ;3;
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Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Why thank you~! :D

I'm sure you will~ 
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
TOMORROW TOMORROW I LOVE YA TOMORROW XD *bursts into song*
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
XD :clap:
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*flies into wall*
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I don't like bikinis... or two piece bathing suits... But for some reason I always end up with them [mothers fault] because nooo I'm a teenager lets head straight to the bikinis! I swear that is what my mom thinks O.O Any ways I seriously love this~!
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Oh... I've seen that problem quite a few times before.
But I sympathize with your hatred of bikinis!

I am glad to hear you like the story though~ ^^
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Hetalia1775 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
I wish that could happen to me... I hope I meet someone like him. =) Love your story it's nice!!!
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
Why thank you~!
And I'm sure you will~
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Hetalia1775 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Thanks!!!
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
You are welcome~
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:iconlady0red:
Lady0Red Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Now I just need him to come tell me that!
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Awe. I'm sure he would~!
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Lady0Red Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course it would be less romantic.

:icongermanysmileplz: :iconspeechplz: You're beautiful

:iconlady0red: :iconspeechplz: Cracker, you lyin' *uses ghetto voice for dramatic 'I smell bull sh*t' effect*
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DragonSkaterofFAB Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's how I would handle it. (I grew up in the ghetto so, yeah...)
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
XD He would just chuckle and peck your cheek~
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Lady0Red Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Please. Plus I have no tan. I'm so white if I laid out in a bikini I would prevent the green house effect because all the rays would bounce back into space.
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
XD Well I can relate with that...
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Lady0Red Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's a writers problem eh? :iconfistbumpplz:
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:icondriftingnotes:
Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
XD True that!
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tea-and-tai Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student General Artist
This was so cute and so fluffeh!!!
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Driftingnotes Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
I'm glad you liked it!
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